HOW
TO WRITE A BETTER RESUME
There
are as many opinions on the subject of resumes as there are job seekers! Some of
the more popular opinions are centered on the use of objectives, summaries,
profiles, title headings, keywords, reference statements, personal interests,
salary history, dates, graphics, fonts, and of course, the length of the resume.
Then
there is the question of format. Should the style of a resume be chronological,
functional or combination? One thing is certain - the resume should sell a
candidate's strengths and qualifications, and answer a hiring manager's
question, "How can you solve my problem?" It should also have full
contact information, be organized, and provide specific information that a
hiring manager needs to decide whether or not a candidate is well suited for a
position. At the very least, it should list relevant experience and
achievements.
PURPOSE
of A RESUME
A
resume is a personal marketing document that communicates your career objective
and value to a hiring company. A strong resume is carefully planned and
developed (not quickly typed up) in an appropriate format (style) designed to
showcase your experience and accomplishments in direct relation to a specific
position.
BASIC
RESUME FORMATTING RULES
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Bold and enlarge your name at the top.
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Keep the sections lined up and consistent.
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Use an Arial or Times New Roman font (or similar).
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Font size shouldn't be smaller than 11pt or larger than 12pt, except for your
Name and Headings.
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Do not include pronouns such as "I," company street addresses, salary,
or reasons for leaving.
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Two-page resume: be sure to fill the second page at least halfway down the page.
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Place “Continued” at the bottom of page one, and your name and “Page 2”
at the top of page two.
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Use graphics sparingly unless you are in a creative field. It is safe to use a
border and shading.
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Leave out personal data, photos, and unrelated hobbies, unless you are an
actor/actress or model.
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If you spell out the state in your address, such as New York, spell out the
states for your jobs.
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Proof, proof, and proof again!
To
help you understand the main differences between various resume styles, the
following illustrates the same resume in chronological, functional, and
combination formats. Also provided below is a comprehensive list of common
mistakes to avoid and useful tips to help your resume to compete in today's
competitive workplace:
PROFESSIONAL
EXPERIENCE
(Chronological)
This
is the most commonly used resume format. It is straightforward, and easily
traces a candidate's career path and progression in a given field. Experience
and accomplishments are listed in reverse chronological order, with the most
recent job positioned first. Because it leaves little to the imagination and
makes it difficult to hide employment gaps, the chronological resume is the most
preferred format of employers and recruiters.
Wireless, Inc., Brooklyn, NY
1998 - Present
Sales Representative
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Prospected and sold communications services to business accounts spanning the
Northeast and Midwest regions.
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Consulted clients on the cost-effective advantages of switching over from
standing services, resulting in a 15% new market penetration with revenues at
$1,850 at close of 2000.
Anderson Doors, Bronx, NY
1993 - 1998
Business Development Manager
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Conducted competitive analyses on European markets to formulate conceptual
strategies that cemented key alliances with distributors throughout Italy and
Germany.
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Aggressively marketed Anderson's company logo and message in print and
television advertising campaigns, heightening brand awareness across U.S. and
European consumer markets.
(Functional)
This
is a skills-based, achievement-oriented format. Experience and accomplishments
are listed in sections with specific headings that extract and showcase ONLY
what is directly applicable to the targeted position. Because it is somewhat
vague sometimes omits dates, it is the least preferred resume format of
employers and recruiters.
SALES
MANAGEMENT
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Prospected and sold communications services to business accounts spanning the
Northeast and Midwest regions.
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Conducted competitive analyses on European markets to formulate conceptual
strategies that cemented key alliances with distributors throughout Italy and
Germany.
MARKET
PENETRATION
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Consulted clients on the cost-effective advantages of switching over from
standing services, resulting in a 15% new market penetration with revenues at
$1,850 at close of 2000.
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Aggressively marketed Anderson's company logo and message in print and
television advertising campaigns, heightening brand awareness across U.S. and
European consumer markets.
(Combination)
This
format combines the chronological and functional formats into one! As with the
functional format, it lists experience and accomplishments in sections with
specific headings directly applicable to the targeted position. However, it
lists employment information under a SEPARATE category (only title, company,
location, and dates). Since it easily tells the reader how a candidate is
qualified for a position while also providing an employment history, it has fast
become a favorite resume format amongst many employers and recruiters. You can
place the employment section after the experience section if you prefer.
Wireless, Inc., Bay Shore, NY
1998 - Present
Sales Representative
Anderson Doors, East Islip, NY
1993 - 1998
Business Development Manager
SALES
MANAGEMENT
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Prospected and sold communications services to business accounts spanning
Northeast and Midwest regions.
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Conducted competitive analyses on European markets to formulate conceptual
strategies that cemented key alliances with distributors throughout Italy and
Germany.
MARKET
PENETRATION
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Consulted clients on the cost-effective advantages of switching over from
standing services, resulting in a 15% new market penetration with revenues at
$1,850 at close of 2000.
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Aggressively marketed Anderson's company logo and message in print and
television advertising campaigns, heightening brand awareness across U.S. and
European consumer markets.
INTRODUCTION
HEADINGS
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PROFILE STATEMENTS
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KEYWORDS
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TITLE HEADINGS
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SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
Use
any one or a combination of these headings to communicate the type of position
you are applying for, and the value you will bring to the hiring company at a
glance. Remember, a reader spends a brief moment on each resume. Your resume
must grab their attention, and hold it!
(Sample
Profile Statement)
Accomplished
sales professional known for delivering strong revenue and profit gains in
highly competitive markets, seeking a Regional Sales Manager position. Bring 15
years of solid experience and select strengths that encompasses sales territory
management and key account development. Equally effective at relationship
building, program development, and team leadership.
Notice
that the actual title "Objective" was omitted, yet mentioned! If you
prefer to use the actual "Objective" title, do not use the outdated
colon after the category.
(Sample
Profile Statement / Keywords)
Accomplished
sales professional known for delivering strong profit gains in highly
competitive markets, seeking a Regional Sales Manager position. Strengths
encompass:
Capital
Sales & Marketing
Team Building/Leadership
Key
Account Development
Client/Vendor
Relations
Financial
Analysis & Reporting
Program Development
(Sample
Title Heading / Profile Statement)
REGIONAL
SALES MANAGER
Known
for delivering strong and sustainable revenue and profit gains in highly
competitive markets. Bring 15 years of solid experience and select strengths
that encompasses sales territory management, key account development, staff
training, team leadership, presentations, and closings.
(Bold,
italicize, or underline the Title Heading so it stands out.)
(Sample
Summary of Qualifications)
Accomplished
sales professional known for delivering strong and sustainable revenue and
profit gains in highly competitive markets. Seeking a Regional Sales Manager
position with a leading pharmaceutical company. Select strengths encompass:
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15 years of cross-industry experience and accomplishments with leading start-up
and high-growth bio-medical companies.
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Strategically build and maintain profitable business relationships.
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Strong communicator and team leader with a pulse on ever-changing industry
trends.
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Effectively manage the sales cycle process from client consultation to closing.
COMMON
MISTAKES, DO'S & DON'TS:
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Name and/or address is too small / too big (headings and name should be at least
font size 14 to 16; address 11 or 12)
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Font size for entire resume is too small / too big / all caps (not counting the
headings, text should be no smaller than 11; no larger than 12)
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Needs an Objective or Title Heading (make it clear to the reader what position
you are seeking. If you unsure, consider career counseling or purchase/rent a
book on career choices)
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Could use a Summary or Profile statement (show your career overview)
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Objective is weak, cliché, unclear, or vague (State what you can do for the
employer; not only what you want from them)
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Resume does not support Objective (be sure to make a connection)
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Lacks accomplishments / career achievements (sell it, don't tell it!)
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Lacks industry-specific terminology / Keywords ("speak" the reader's
language)
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Jobs are not in the proper order-see below for more on resume tips and formats
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Sentences are too choppy-five words per bullet (expand; make it interesting)
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Wording is weak; statements are too simple (use action verbs and a thesaurus)
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Same information repeated too many times (use a functional/combination format)
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Too many typos and grammatical errors (read it backwards; have a friend
proof-read it!)
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Unrelated jobs go back too far in years (keep it to 7-10 years in most cases)
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Includes too much unrelated information (stay on track; keep the position in
mind)
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Does not include enough related information (show how well rounded you are)
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Uses pronouns - "I, He, She, His, Her" (not necessary or is
understood)
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Style is outdated looking (headings are underlined and followed by colons
":", the word "duties" is used, and uses
"responsibilities:" as subheadings)
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Second page is too short - only a third down or less (condense/combine)
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Second page does not include your name (what if the second page is misplaced?)
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Too much or not enough white space (looks empty, inexperienced)
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Uses the full address for employers (list only the town and state)
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Uses full employment dates such as 12/11/01 (list only the month and year)
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Lists reason for leaving or explains situation (if you must, save it for the
letter)
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Includes a Professional References Available Upon Request statement at the
bottom of the resume (not wrong, but not necessary. Remember, this is not an
option. If the employer wants references, they will ask for them)
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Includes a cover letter / salary information on the resume (use separate sheets)
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Includes unrelated personal interests and hobbies such as "enjoy reading,
long walks, music, travel, knitting, and puzzles" (include interests ONLY
if it is related to your career Objective)
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Includes personal information such as married, homeowner, two children (Leave
off. It is unrelated to the position, and risks possible discrimination)
About
The Author:
Ann Baehr is a CPRW and President of Best Resumes of New York. Notable credentials
include her former role as Second Vice President of NRWA and contribution to 25+
resume and cover letter sample books. To learn more visit
http://www.e-bestresumes.com or view resume samples written by Ann Baehr
at http://www.e-bestresumes.com/resume_samples.htm
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